Wednesday, September 28, 2011

Analysis of an Essay

Who: Cajun people who speak French
What: French language going extinct through time
When: three hundred years ago
Where: in Canada to Louisiana
Why: Culture changes, some other custom replaces it

  1. M
  2. E
  3. E
  4. E
  5. E
  6. A
  7. E
  8. E
  9. A
  10. L
I like the MEAL plan she used in her writing. I would try to use it in my writing.

  • Restate how the Acadian people struggle
  • States how people feel about their culture
  • Restates thesis
  • Final strong idea

Louisiana
Heritage
In other words, connecting with one’s own community and culture as well as other future French cultures through out the world it is beneficial to be bilingual.

1 comment:

  1. I think that your sentence pretty much ties culture in the sentence just right.

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